Making Decisions-draft one
Growing up means making my own decisions. For example, I have to plan my own future, and find the direction where I should go, etc. Parents can’t be with us all the time, so we learn how to be independence is necessary. Gradually, before we become a adult, we will have a lot of challenges on the road-growing. We aren’t able to be such an ignorant girl all the while. Therefore, I am supposed to make decisions for myself.The hardest decision that I ever made was making a determination to go on a diet when I was an elementary school student. I loved eating. I ate the snakes all the time. So I became very fat in the sixth grade. But now I look thinner than before. I found if I have determined determination that finally I can achieve my own goal.
posted by 郭包子 @ 8:56 PM
6 Comments:
妳那句，parents...all the time，
也可以，
It is impossible that parents are able to stay with us all the time.
孩子，你吃蛇呀，
是snack，點心，
all the time重覆出現 可以換別的
I have determined determination
→determination也改成別的用詞吧
後面的determination可替換成resolution才不會有重複的感覺
我不確定那個,etc.的用法對不對耶!
因為阿..字典的例句有用到,etc.都是一些名詞、形容詞、動詞之類的..不知道句子行不行
第一段跟第二段間可以空一行
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...we learn how to be independence is necessary.
→be 後面+adj.吧? to be independent.
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