Autobiography drift-two(part 1)
I am Sin-Wun Guo, a seventeen-year-old girl, was born in Tainan. My father is a serious person. He appeared to be unfriendly with every one, but he is an honest man. He always teaches me that the appearance of a person is not necessary, however having a sincere heart is more important than everything. My mother is a housewife. She was a kindergarten teacher. So she has more patience than other people. Even though I do foolish behavior, she still forgives me patiently. Their characters affect me a lot. They hope I can be a kind person. When I was a child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my character. I have a young brother. He is a junior high student. He is good at painting. Sometimes I will ask for him does some production for me. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I must say I am lucky enough to grow in such a great home.My favorite hobby is playing badminton. It helps me to be in a good mood. When I was very young, my father taught me how to play it. On the other hand, I also like the quiet activity. Such as badminton, ride bicycle and so on. Especially badminton can without under sunshine. I don’t like bask in the sun. Even my parents like this exercise, too. It will further our relationship. If all of us have free time, my family plays badminton every Sundays.
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I am Sin-Wun Guo, a seventeen-year-old girl born in Tainan. My father is a serious person, and he appears to be unfriendly with everyone, but he is an honest man. He always teaches me that the appearance of a person is not necessary; however, having a sincere heart is more important than everything. My mother is a housewife, and she was a kindergarten teacher. Therefore, she has more patience than other people. Even though I sometimes behave foolishly, she still forgives me. Their characters affect me a lot. They hope I can be a kind person. As a result, when I was a child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my character. I have a younger brother who is a junior high student. He is good at painting. Sometimes I ask him to paint for me. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I am absolutely sure thatI am lucky enough to grow in such a great home.
My favorite hobby is playing badminton. It helps me to be in a good mood. When I was very young, my father taught me how to play it. On the other hand, I also like the quiet activity. Such as badminton, ride bicycle and so on. Especially badminton can without under sunshine. I don’t like bask in the sun. Even my parents like this exercise, too. It will further our relationship. If all of us have free time, my family plays badminton every Sundays.
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I am Sin-Wun Guo, a seventeen-year-old girl born in Tainan. My father is a serious person, and he appears to be unfriendly with everyone, but he is an honest man. He always teaches me that the appearance of a person is not necessary; however, having a sincere heart is more important than everything. My mother is a housewife, and she was a kindergarten teacher. Therefore, she has more patience than other people. Even though I sometimes behave foolishly, she still forgives me. Their characters affect me a lot. They hope I can be a kind person. As a result, when I was a child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my character. I have a younger brother who is a junior high student. He is good at painting. Sometimes I ask him to paint for me. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I am absolutely sure thatI am lucky enough to grow in such a great home.
Talk about my hobby. My favorite hobby is playing badminton. Because it always helps me to be in a good mood. On the other hand, I also like the quiet activity. Especially it can be played without under the sunshine.
Even my parents like this exercise,too. It will further our relationship. So badminton is my favorite sport which I like to play in my free time.
My favorite hobby is playing badminton because it always helps me to be in a good mood. On the other hand, I also like the quiet activity, especially it can be played without under the sunshine. Even my parents like this exercise, too. It will further our relationship. Therefore, badminton is my favorite sport which I like to play in my free time.
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