MY DIARY 2/14
Today is Valentine's Day, but I have to work in the school. I was very busy in a whole day until afternoon. Aunt who works with me cooked a big pickle chafing dish. It looked so delicious. Although I was very full, I still ate much food. We had four people eat up the food of the inside. I was so excited. Because I thought this is the feast of the first time in my life. The weather was cold but our mood was hot. All of us had a good time. I hope our emotion can be so good forever!
posted by 郭包子 @ 1:32 AM
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The weather was cold but our mood was hot.
用hot有點怪 用high看看吧
We had four people eat up the food of the inside.
這句真的很怪
是要表達這樣嗎→There were four people eating up the chafing dish.
其他整體都寫的很好喔
用warm好像也不錯_
對阿* 那句真的有點奇怪_= ="
唉唷~你一開始就像是你的口吻了~!!!
不愧是阿包壓~!!←用來證明是你寫的嗎!?@
小姐...你時態好像不一致唷~!
today is ...
後面你用過去式...
We had four people eat up the food of the inside. 這一句阿...總覺得看不太懂ㄝ..
of the inside我不懂是指什麼..
如果你是要說全部吃完的話..
->We four people ate up all the food.
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