Monday, January 01, 2007

An Embarrassing Experience-draft one

There was an embarrassing experience in my memory. One day, on my way home after school, I rode my bicycle with my friend. When we were passing a temple, I saw a woman who looked like my junior high school teacher. I wanted to get closer to make sure if she was my teacher or not. But I can't see her very clearly. I guessed she must be my teacher. I stopped riding and I wanted to say "Hi" with her. I got close to her very slowly in back of her. Finally I almost sure she was my teacher. There fore, I went to hug from her back and she turned around. My God! She was not my teacher. She was a stranger. My friend and I said sorry many times and ran away very quickly. It's very embarrassing. This is my most embarrassing experience.

3 Comments:

At 5:58 AM , Blogger 飛奇 said...

"There fore, I went ..."
前面那個...應該是合起來的吧?

 
At 6:46 AM , Blogger 平井" said...

第五行的can't應該是could't
in back of her應該加個the
還有therefore是連起來的

 
At 7:19 PM , Blogger GIGI said...

There fore 這個字錯
整篇文章寫的很不錯喔!

 

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