My Bedroom -draft one
There are many things in my bedroom. Enter my room through the door, and my wardrobe is in front of the door and in the left corner. There is put a lot of clothes in it. Beside the wardrobe is my bed. And the dresser is in the right corner. I put some cosmetics on it. Before I go out, I am always sitting there. My desk is between the bed and the dresser. I study in front of the desk everyday. The last thing is my bookcase. The bookcase is on the right well. I put many books that I like so much on it. I really like stay in my room when I have free time.
posted by 郭包子 @ 7:26 PM
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There is put a lot of clothes in it.
There are a lot of clothes in it.我覺得這樣改成會比較好
The bookcase is on the right well.
應該是wall
"Before I go out, I am always sitting there. "
應該不用到be動詞作v-ing，直接用always sit there就好
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我是瀞婷"
我覺得Enter my room through the door→Entering my room through the door。
There is put a lot of clothes in it.→不用put就好ㄌ八
Before I go out,→你也可以→Before going out
Enter my room through the door
這句前面加個When或Entering會比較好喔
There is put a lot of clothes in it. 你應該是要寫It is put a lot of clothes.
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