MY DIARY 2/23
Today, my father decided to take us to ancient buildings in Tainan. He thought that my brother and I can take advantage of this vacation to relax. First, we went to ain-pin-cou-bau(安平古堡).It's a castle originally built by Dutches. I saw many things in the small museum. In the afternoon, we went to yi-zai-chin-chen(億載金城). There were many stands in front of the gate. We walked along the moat admiring the beauty and quiet. It was really an enjoyment. I'm glad I'm a resident of Tainan city.
posted by 郭包子 @ 2:58 AM
4 Comments:
就第3行的can改用could
寫的還不錯的日記呢!
I'm glad I'm a resident of Tainan city.
→第二個I'm前加個that_
感覺比較不會太緊湊!_
不錯啦*
口已不要一開口就today today的! 乖唷~
小姐~請切記你的時態~!!
He thought that my brother and I can take advantage ...
↑could
下回待續...
It's a castle originally built by Dutches.我覺得加個which會比較好喔
-->It's a castle which originally built by Dutches.
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