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School Life
I always have a busy school life. As I become the senior-high, I am hoped to enter a university. Especially the entrance exam is a keen competition. Therefore, I’m forced to study day and night. I’m weighed down with lessons. And it’s really a burden for me. That’s why I keep busy at school and home all the time. Besides, I also have to give up my favorite extracurricular activities. I wish I could have a colorful school life.Computer
Computers play an important role in our every day life. They can help students hand in homework quickly, and also help people deliver information in time. While you opening the computer, you must full in love with it. However, you have to remind yourself that don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Almost parents don’t like children too depend on computers. Especially the discuss which on the Bulletin Board System is very waste time.
posted by 郭包子 @ 8:27 PM
7 Comments:
( 1 ) 覺ㄉ壓~用過去式會比較好唷
( 2 ) That’s why I keep [busy] at school and home all the time.
→busying
( a ) ComputerComputers←???多打ㄇ?
( b ) System is very waste time.
→ system is very wasteful time.
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1.That’s why I keep [busy] at school and home all the time.
-->busying
2.ComputerComputers play an important role in our [every day] life.
-->everyday 沒有格開喔!
3.While you opening the computer、you must [full] in love with it.
-->fall
你的標題跑進文章裡了~
While you opening the computer,
→你的open是要把電腦主機殼打開嗎
應該用turning on~
Especially the discuss which on the Bulletin Board System is very waste time.
最後waste是動詞 所以要改成waste of time~
Almost parents don’t like children...
→ 改Most of parents...比較好吧!
While you opening the computer這句應該用turning on 會比較好 !!
還有every day life 的every day沒有分開喔! 要在一起。
That's why I keep busy at school and home all the time.這句的busy要加ing!
School Life always have a busy school life.
life多加個l了
怪怪的耶?? →同時出現兩個school life?
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