Water draft one
Water is necessary to me. It plays an important role in my life. For instance, I have to drink 2 liters of water everyday. It will make me go to bathroom several times so my body’s metabolism is quicker and my body is healthier bit by bit. Second, I like to take a shower per day. I wash my hair and my body very often. Therefore, waster is needed for me. Third, it can help me wash lots of thing. Such as dishes, clothes, mop floor and so on. It is essential in my life,
posted by 郭包子 @ 8:29 AM
2 Comments:
1.妳沒寫first就寫了second and third
2.It will make me go to bathroom several times [in one day] so [that] my body’s metabolism is quicker and my body is healthier bit by bit.
3.Third,....lots of thing要加s
Therefore, waster is needed for me.
這一句話有點怪怪的,不是很懂意思
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